"The Catch," by Joe Mirabello

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"The Catch," by Joe Mirabello

Post by Kenwood on Thu Dec 20, 2012 6:38 am

Anyone wishing to add some thoughts about this particular story and/or author, feel free to do so here. Praise and criticism is encouraged equally, but please keep the latter on the constructive side.

BEWARE OF SPOILERS!

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Re: "The Catch," by Joe Mirabello

Post by steven pirie on Sat Dec 29, 2012 3:42 pm

This was probably my favourite of this issue's offerings. I like the idea of a bathful of 'forever', though the traditionalist in me wanted the crystal taken back to the lake. A nicely told story, I think.

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Re: "The Catch," by Joe Mirabello

Post by blankslatejoe on Mon Dec 31, 2012 5:05 pm

Thanks, steven!

I'm still pretty new to the world-of-getting-my-stuff-published, so any and all feedback, be it praise or crits, is definitely welcome!

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Re: "The Catch," by Joe Mirabello

Post by steven pirie on Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:34 pm

Well, an acceptance by ST is not a bad start! salute

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Re: "The Catch," by Joe Mirabello

Post by kurtnewton on Mon Feb 25, 2013 12:07 am

Tied for my favorite of the issue. Cool story, very well written. Ken has a knack for sifting these gems from the slushpile. Must read.

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Re: "The Catch," by Joe Mirabello

Post by Kenwood on Mon Feb 25, 2013 12:49 am

All but one of us was on board with this one from the beginning. Great story.

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Re: "The Catch," by Joe Mirabello

Post by Shiney on Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:45 pm

It's crazy good!

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Post by Bouch22 on Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:00 pm

My other favorite from this issue.

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