"Hide-and-Seek," by F.J. Bergmann (Poetry)

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"Hide-and-Seek," by F.J. Bergmann (Poetry)

Post by Kenwood on Thu Dec 20, 2012 6:37 am

Anyone wishing to add some thoughts about this particular story and/or author, feel free to do so here. Praise and criticism is encouraged equally, but please keep the latter on the constructive side.

BEWARE OF SPOILERS!

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Re: "Hide-and-Seek," by F.J. Bergmann (Poetry)

Post by kurtnewton on Mon Feb 25, 2013 12:20 am

I think this is the best poem Shock Totem has published.

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Re: "Hide-and-Seek," by F.J. Bergmann (Poetry)

Post by Kenwood on Mon Feb 25, 2013 12:44 am

kurtnewton wrote:I think this is the best poem Shock Totem has published.
Right on. It's only our...third, right?

Why am I asking you? Haha.

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Post by Shiney on Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:44 pm

I actually think I wasn't a fan of this one at the beginning.

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