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Post by Bordo on Sun Apr 08, 2012 6:54 pm

So, there's this guy who's like, an enemy of the state or something? He totally gets executed and they dump his body in a cave somewhere. A few days after the execution a few of the other people from this dude's organization figure out the location of the cave and sneak over there to get his body so that they can "give him a proper burial" or whatever. So they totally do a recon over there but...here's the twist..HIS BODY IS NO LONGER THERE! Like, this HUMONGOUS stone that was in front of the cave has been totally rolled away. Like this dude now has total zombie strength or something? Anyway, his friends are all like, WTF?!? when...twist #2...these OTHER WORDLY BEINGS appear and are all like, 'why do you seek the living among the dead?' which is FUCKING SPOOKY AS HELL and FREAKS THEM OUT. But they go looking for their boy anyway even though he might totally be an alien-mind-controlled ghoul at this point.

That's all I have so far. I don't think it's been done before. Actually, I think something similar has been done before but I think that one ended with a flamethrower rampage. Or something.

Also, Happy Easter.

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Re: Sweet story idea...

Post by blackthorn on Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:08 pm

rockon
Awesome!
Def

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Re: Sweet story idea...

Post by Tall Tyrion on Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:43 am

Nice! headbang

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Re: Sweet story idea...

Post by kd1984 on Tue Apr 10, 2012 4:37 pm

And then, much, much later, a bunch of dudes are sitting around in a room, right? They're just chilling, talking about maybe trying to find more LSD, when OUT OF NOWHERE, this fucking wind appears, right? Like not even PETER, whose ass does nothing but explode at regular times, could produce wind like this. Then there's this explosion of fire everywhere that looked like tongues. Fucking tongues, dude. Then they start talking and stuff, and I swear God, that Peter was straight up channeling our boy's ghost, which is majorly fucked up because he's been dead for like a long time. I mean, he was using big words like he did and everything.

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Re: Sweet story idea...

Post by Bordo on Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:13 pm

kd1984 wrote:And then, much, much later, a bunch of dudes are sitting around in a room, right? They're just chilling, talking about maybe trying to find more LSD, when OUT OF NOWHERE, this fucking wind appears, right? Like not even PETER, whose ass does nothing but explode at regular times, could produce wind like this. Then there's this explosion of fire everywhere that looked like tongues. Fucking tongues, dude. Then they start talking and stuff, and I swear God, that Peter was straight up channeling our boy's ghost, which is majorly fucked up because he's been dead for like a long time. I mean, he was using big words like he did and everything.

AWESOME.

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Re: Sweet story idea...

Post by Shiney on Tue Apr 10, 2012 8:51 pm

When you guys are burning ifor an eternity n hell.

I shall roast my marshmallows over your flaming torment.

Just sayin'.

lol



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Re: Sweet story idea...

Post by kd1984 on Tue Apr 10, 2012 9:37 pm

Shiney wrote:When you guys are burning ifor an eternity n hell.

I shall roast my marshmallows over your flaming torment.

Just sayin'.

lol



Wait, you mean you don't run that place? lol

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Re: Sweet story idea...

Post by Shiney on Tue Apr 10, 2012 9:39 pm

SShhhhhhh!

It's a secret.

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Re: Sweet story idea...

Post by Bordo on Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:37 pm

kd1984 wrote:Wait, you mean you don't run that place? lol

Zing!

Your move, Brother John.

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