"The Rainbow Serpent," by Vincent Pendergast

[Kenwood]

Anyone wishing to add some thoughts about this particular story and/or author, feel free to do so here. Praise and criticism is encouraged equally, but please keep the latter on the constructive side.

BEWARE OF SPOILERS!

[kurtnewton]

Read this one this morning. My second favorite "complete story" of the issue! I like the interweaving of the storyline with the Rainbow Serpent mythology. Well done!

[Vincent]

Cheers, Kurt.

I'm a fan of parallel, complementary storylines. Though there were times when I wondered if I was overdoing it with this one. I've got Gavin in the present, Gavin leading up to the present, ancient mythology, and ancient mythology getting mixed up with Gavin in the present.

[Mercedes]

I'd like to point out which staff pounced on this one first. Yeah, IT WAS ME!!!

Fantastic story, Vincent. The surrealism was delicious.

[Balor]

Cheers, Kurt.

I'm a fan of parallel, complementary storylines. Though there were times when I wondered if I was overdoing it with this one. I've got Gavin in the present, Gavin leading up to the present, ancient mythology, and ancient mythology getting mixed up with Gavin in the present.

But it works. Beautifully.

And of course Mercedes picked it. She and Nick are the only ones with class...

[Mercedes]

Ooh, Ken and Shiney are going to come after you now! Better flee to Vegas where it's safe!

[Balor]

Be there soon...

(Two days? Really? Jeez, where'd the time go?)

[RicardoBare]

This one was probably my favorite. I'm a big fan of modern myth stuff.

[Vincent]

Hey thanks everyone. I do get a kick knowing that someone out there in the wide world likes something I wrote.

[Tall Tyrion]

And of course Mercedes picked it. She and Nick are the only ones with class...

This man is smart.

[Shiney]

Cheers, Kurt.

I'm a fan of parallel, complementary storylines. Though there were times when I wondered if I was overdoing it with this one. I've got Gavin in the present, Gavin leading up to the present, ancient mythology, and ancient mythology getting mixed up with Gavin in the present.

But it works. Beautifully.

And of course Mercedes picked it. She and Nick are the only ones with class...

[Vincent]

Hey guys, thought I'd let you know that this one has been accepted by Pseudopod as a reprint. So it'll be an online audio story. That'll be cool.

[Kenwood]

Hey guys, thought I'd let you know that this one has been accepted by Pseudopod as a reprint. So it'll be an online audio story. That'll be cool.

Awesome! But...it needs to be read by an Australian, yeah?

[Tall Tyrion]

Crocodile Dundee style!

[Vincent]

Hey guys, thought I'd let you know that this one has been accepted by Pseudopod as a reprint. So it'll be an online audio story. That'll be cool.

Awesome! But...it needs to be read by an Australian, yeah?

I was thinking about that too. I'd be nice... but I don't yet know how they'll do it.