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Post by steven pirie on Sat Jan 31, 2009 7:20 am

We had good fun elsewhere with this... the idea is you add a line of six words, no more, no less, and we see where the story goes. At times, elsewhere, it was strangely coherrent... at others, it was decidedly odd... We even got dafter and wrote one backwards, starting with an ending and working to a beginning (that really felt strange).

I'll start... whoever fancies it copy and paste the previous lines and add your six word line below (so each post has the entire 'story').

Anyone game?


When the blood stopped flowing, Mary...

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Post by Guest on Sat Jan 31, 2009 7:35 am

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary...

licked her lips, she felt the...

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Post by Guest on Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:34 am

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary...

licked her lips, she felt the...

smooth crystal in her mouth, and ...

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Post by andrewkempster on Sat Jan 31, 2009 3:32 pm

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary...

licked her lips, she felt the...

smooth crystal in her mouth, and ...

of course, chunks of his tongue...

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Post by Mercedes on Sat Jan 31, 2009 3:45 pm

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary...

licked her lips, she felt the...

smooth crystal in her mouth, and ...

of course, chunks of his tongue...

oh well, collateral damage, she thought...

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Post by Kenwood on Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:45 pm

(Sorry...I had to change the format. Haha. Feel free to change it back.)

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary licked her lips, she felt the smooth crystal in her mouth, and, of course, chunks of his tongue. Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed

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Post by Shiney on Sat Jan 31, 2009 9:14 pm

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary licked her lips, she felt the smooth crystal in her mouth, and, of course, chunks of his tongue. Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed, silence sprouting wings in the corner.

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Post by Natalie L. Sin on Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:19 pm

Silence was naked and seemed distracted.

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Post by Tall Tyrion on Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:30 pm

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary licked her lips, she felt the
smooth crystal in her mouth, and, of course, chunks of his tongue. Oh
well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed, silence sprouting wings in the corner. Silence was naked and seemed distracted. Mary waited for a few moments, and then she

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Re: Add a line...

Post by steven pirie on Sun Feb 01, 2009 5:53 am

Foul! TT needed 9 words and must be pointed at and derided with all haste! Laughing

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary
licked her lips. She felt the
smooth crystal in her mouth, and,
of course, chunks of his tongue.

Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed
silence sprouting wings in the corner.

Silence was naked and seemed distracted.
Mary waited for a few moments, and then she
said: "Hello, Silence, cat got your

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Post by Tall Tyrion on Sun Feb 01, 2009 12:50 pm

Oops!! I missed the word count rule. Embarassed

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary
licked her lips. She felt the
smooth crystal in her mouth, and,
of course, chunks of his tongue.

Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed
silence sprouting wings in the corner.

Silence was naked and seemed distracted.
Mary waited for a few moments, and then she
said: "Hello, Silence, cat got your tounge; or is it I?"

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Post by cvrysen on Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:05 pm

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary
licked her lips. She felt the
smooth crystal in her mouth, and,
of course, chunks of his tongue.

Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed
silence sprouting wings in the corner.

Silence was naked and seemed distracted.
Mary waited for a few moments, and then she
said: "Hello, Silence, cat got your tongue; or is it I?"

Silence cried... silently, ignoring the strange

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Post by Mercedes on Mon Feb 02, 2009 12:04 am

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary
licked her lips. She felt the
smooth crystal in her mouth, and,
of course, chunks of his tongue.

Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed
silence sprouting wings in the corner.

Silence was naked and seemed distracted.
Mary waited for a few moments, and then she
said: "Hello, Silence, cat got your tongue; or is it I?"

Silence cried... silently, ignoring the strange
mispelling of the word "staff" and

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Post by Tall Tyrion on Mon Feb 02, 2009 1:50 am

lol

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary
licked her lips. She felt the
smooth crystal in her mouth, and,
of course, chunks of his tongue.

Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed
silence sprouting wings in the corner.

Silence was naked and seemed distracted.
Mary waited for a few moments, and then she
said: "Hello, Silence, cat got your tongue; or is it I?"

Silence cried... silently, ignoring the strange
mispelling of the word "staff" and
exposed the bloody stump of her

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Post by Kenwood on Mon Feb 02, 2009 2:00 am

Who turned this into a poem?

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary licked her lips. She felt the smooth crystal in her mouth, and, of course, chunks of his tongue. Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed silence sprouting wings in the corner.

Silence was naked and seemed distracted. Mary waited for a few moments, and then she said: "Hello, Silence, cat got your tongue; or is it I?"

Silence cried... silently, ignoring the strange mispelling of the word "staff" and exposed the bloody stump of her disco banana. It was a sad

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Post by Natalie L. Sin on Mon Feb 02, 2009 2:06 am

When the blood stopped flowing, Mary licked her lips. She felt the smooth crystal in her mouth, and, of course, chunks of his tongue. Oh well, collateral damage, she thought.

It was then that she noticed silence sprouting wings in the corner.

Silence was naked and seemed distracted. Mary waited for a few moments, and then she said: "Hello, Silence, cat got your tongue; or is it I?"

Silence cried... silently, ignoring the strange mispelling of the word "staff" and exposed the bloody stump of her disco banana. It was a sad way to end the celebrity orgy.

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